31 May 2019

Door to the sea

The sea murmurs softly, beyond the door,
babbling kid waves talk back to the shore.
Their foamy white laces rhyme on the clouds,
pinned to the sky high above the grounds.
The sunshine flies with the wings of a dove,
mountains float in the arms of the cove.
The door is open, the blue world flows in,
I feel the salt breeze kissing my skin.
I long for the sky, the sea and the shore,
but I can not step through that blue door.

(Inspired by Mia's beautiful painting :-))

Ajtó a tengerre

Mormol a tenger az ajtó mögött,
partig szalad a sok hullámkölyök.
Hófehér fodruk rímel az égre
gyöngéden tűzött csipkeszegélyre.
Kék hegyek ringnak az öböl vizén,
feloldja őket a hajnali fény.
Nyitva az ajtó, vár rám a világ,
a küszöböt mégsem léphetem át.

(Mia csodaszép festménye volt az inspiráció:-))

(Island Vir, Croatia, years ago)


  1. Lovely... I need a sea trip!

    1. Thank you, Sandi! I need a sea trip too. :-)
      Have a lovely weekend!

  2. this is beautiful poem dear Edit !

    amazing and delicate treatment of words and expressions!

  3. Such beautiful and soothing words and images, dearest Edit!
    That's something I really need today... and I'll be back when I'm in a better mood. :)
    Big hugs! <3

    1. Thank you so much, dearest Sara! I hope everything is ok now. ♥
      Big big hugs to you!

  4. Edit's post is more than a simple art. Because Edit is the breath of an art-soul that exists in every place where art wins the silence.
    Thank you very much for your nice comment.

    1. Thank you so much for this beautiful comment, Yannis. Your kind words make me blush. 😊

  5. What a beautiful poem, Edit. And how lovely your photos! They are really a door to the sea! And, A HUGE THANK YOU, for the link to my blog. I am really glad that my painting inspired you. I send you a big kiss and many hugs, my dear friend.

    1. Thank you so much, my dear friend! I'm so glad you liked my little poem! Your painting is beautiful!
      Have a happy Friday, and a wonderful weekend, dear Mia!
      Big hugs!

  6. How wonderful to welcome summer with such a beautiful poem. I love the sea in your equally beautiful photos.

    1. Thank you so much, dear Amalia! Have a happy Sunday!


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