23 December 2018

Wordlessly


The sky split up today,
and I could see the trace
of the lonely God
through the shiny break.

I saw his tousled hair,
his gloomy thoughtful eyes,
wrinkled by troubles,
shaded by the clouds.

He sadly looked at me,
I had so much to ask,
but the words were lost
in the purple dusk.

The world was blind and deaf,
I stood there like a child,
frightened and alone,
with the growing night.



















Szótlanul


Ma felhasadt az ég,
S a fénylő résen át
Megláthattam Isten
Tiszta lábnyomát.

S láttam komoly szemét,
A felhőt homlokán,
Reszketőn simított
Végig ősz haján.

Nézett rám könnyezőn
A bíbor alkonyon,
Egy kisgyerek les át
Így a kulcslyukon.

Ó, hány kérdés gyötört!
De hangom elhagyott.
Szemlesütve álltam.
Minden hallgatott.

A fény lassan kihunyt,
A függöny földre hullt.
Nem volt többé jövő,
S elveszett a múlt.





































Skywatch Friday
dVerse

25 comments:

  1. Wow. Glad I clicked on this powerful poem!

    "lonely God"

    :( ...

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  2. You are a true poet, dear Edit...
    Happy New Year✨⭐️

    Hugs, Ida

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    1. Thank you so much, dear Ida!
      Happy New Year!
      Hugs! ♥

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  3. Hello dearest Edit,
    this is not one of the best days of my life and I must say your poem fits very well to it. :)
    Besides, it's very beautiful!
    I wish you and yours a happy and healthy 2019.
    Do you have snow now?

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    1. Thank you so much, dear Sara. I, also, wish you a happy 2019. I hope everything is well with you and your loved ones. (For me, last year was not the best, and this year started very sadly.)

      There was snow here 2 weeks ago, but it has already melted. It is raining now.
      Have a lovely weekend, dear Sara! Hugs!

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  4. Hello dear Edit!
    What a wonderful poem!
    Stunning pictures and breathtaking colors!
    Thank you for sharing!
    Have a lovely day!
    Dimi...

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    1. Thank you very much, dear Dimi!
      Have a lovely weekend!

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  5. Thank you very very much, your kind words are appreciated.

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  6. Very beautiful photos, Edit. Have a happy weekend. Hugs.

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    1. Thank you very much, dear Sandra! Hugs!

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  7. such a beautiful and touching poem dear Edit!!!!!!!!!!!!

    it warmed my heart , i realized as i was there standing beside you before the enchanting gloomy sky ,like a helpless lonely child with so much to ask !

    just GLORIOUS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    thank you for sublime words and magical images
    you made my day!
    hugs!

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    1. Thank you so much for your lovely words, my dear friend! ♥
      Big big hugs!

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  8. Gorgeous sky shots! And wonderful words too.

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  9. Beautiful poem and photos. Such pretty colors in your skies!

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    1. Thank you very much! Have a nice weekend!

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  10. I like your description of God as lonely looking for us.

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  11. When God is having a bad day, how unfortunate for us. Maybe worn down with too many requests? Maybe after a night's rest daybreak will be better. Gorgeous photos.

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  12. I love this poem so much. Also, I want to add, that you perfectly chose the photos for this poem. I fell in love with these sunsets.

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